Sunday, September 14, 2008

solitary musings...

You ask me,if i'm alone;
I smile and say,"yes".
You ask me, if I'm lonely;
I smile again and say,"no".
I've got company..

of hours that fluttered by in seconds
of seconds that'll linger on for years
of things which happened,
and those which did not
of words which were said,
and those which were not
of half truths and true lies
of green grass and blue skies
of smiles, sights, sounds,smells,
looks, laughter..
of you.

You ask me, if I miss you;
I say,"no".
You can't miss your heartbeats
can you?
they're just there, all the time
whether you notice them or not
and if they are not'
you still can't miss them!

You tell me that I'm silent;
maybe, there's not much to say,
or maybe.. too much.
maybe, I don't have enough words,
or maybe.. just too many
or maybe..I don't need them...

You ask me, if I'm happy;
...
can I be anything else?
Can you be?

7 comments:

Unknown said...

Beautiful.....
The best part is the ending.. You've answered something that has no answer :] keep up the good work...

the do- dreamer said...

@ hitesh
thanx!! some questions can not be answered, they can just be questioned back..

Mystic-Frost said...

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wonderful...keep writing
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Diya

Anonymous said...

nice blog! :d

Unknown said...

bahaut badiya, very nice.
beech mein likhna band kar diya tha, you write very well, just keep going, keep writing and more importantly keep smiling!:-)

Anonymous said...

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Priyanka Khot said...

Beautiful.

The starting was the best. Alone but not lonely... that can happen too.

You explained it all with a beautiful string of words.